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Books
Books I have completed reading since January 2018:

1. No Man's Nightingale - Ruth Rendell
2. One Day - David Nicholls
3. The Door - Margaret Atwood
Haiku
Wednesday, September 3, 2008
I wanted to explain what is haiku but my brain has ran out of juice at the moment so I will do it the next time. But somehow I attempted to write my version. And yes I know it doesn't follow the traditional version but oh well didn't I say it's an attempt?

Version 1

Tadaima
the living room echoes
how i wish the reply
was okaeri

Version 2

Summer morning
silent warm breeze -
ice cream at hand

I will remember to write on part 3 and the explanation. Of now, SLEEP.
8 Comments.


I thought your first hiaku was simple and sweet. Mixing around some jap and english, good job!
» L-Lawliet on 2008-09-03 11:57:50

I love Haiku! ^-^

RE: Yes, I am fine. Thank you. I don't go to that part of the neighborhood anymore. I'm thankful he didn't see me walk home.
» Kirei on 2008-09-03 02:42:52

R:C
I'm happy knowing that I have packages coming my way. I just dislike the fact that it's so damn inconvenient to have to pick them up from the post office when, if I were living in a single-family home, they would have just left it on my doorstep.
» ranor on 2008-09-03 11:21:00

Re: "i didn't know u r from nz..."
Christchurch. So did you use to live in NZ, or are living here?
» computersaysno on 2008-09-04 12:45:34

Ah, good ol' Palmy. What did you study?
» computersaysno on 2008-09-04 12:53:56

I don't quite understand the concept of a haiku.
» Nuttz on 2008-09-04 07:52:46

Those are beautifull.
They really bring out what life is....... to much??
» Domino (172.192.170.66) on 2008-09-05 01:35:27

wow...you can write haiku! did you take up japanese? what's after the ice-cream?
» sdovelly (219.95.213.148) on 2008-09-09 07:23:15

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