I finally able to cough up some words to complete the poem I wanted to start with twirl, twirl, twirl. But as usual, it would be subjected to change as I see it fits (<-- this sentence has grammatical error right? Please correct me if you think so).

Twirl twirl twirl,
the short hand tickles,
and the long hand whines irritably,
the duo could never be stopped
so what have you achieve in life?

Moving On...Get Smart
Thanks for reading my review. Yeah, it's a highly comedic movie if you want some nonsense, crude humour and stupidity. I gave 3.5 stars oso bcuz i enjoy the movie, if it is not a comedy, I will give it lower oledi. Hope u enjoy the movie as well. More movies for review in the blog and to come..Thanks
» Bernard Chung (118.100.171.138) on 2008-06-25 07:06:51

lols the poem is freakishly short. lols~ there's a spark of imagination there when u refered the short hand of a clock to be ticklish and the other whinning. but then u kill the playful act of gesture with a blunt question of reminiscence to the past, which in my case is full with remoarse and regrets. kekekek... thats just me.
» faith (60.50.8.63) on 2008-06-27 11:33:21

yea! that's my love too:D
but I don't have that chance, because everytime it rains and I'm holding all my school's books and my bags, so how can I wet them? :'(
» kevin14 on 2008-06-28 12:17:13

that way isn't as great as when the first time you see the rain. haha! have you ever try that before? I mean walk in the rain..
» kevin14 on 2008-06-28 07:33:02

re:
yea.. been waiting for it.
» Nuttz on 2008-06-28 10:01:03

RE
nope i really meant running not ruining.....Running away means like stealing in my sentence. =)
» elitevillain on 2008-06-29 02:41:10

YO! :P
I like the "Twirl Twirl Twirl" :P Hm.. maybe minus the "The" and "And the" will sound better hehe.. ^^ Nice short inspirational poem though I can't really relate the hand and life ^^" haha..
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